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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-13 09:20 PM

I crawl up the
vine
on my pillow.

Soft wind
hushed whisper:
"Sleep...sleep"

Prick my finger,
on white case
gleams red.

Dreamcatcher
sways slightly
above my bed.

Grasshoppers chirp
as I drift off..
The music
lulls me to sleep.

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

1 posted 2003-07-13 09:26 PM

"Grasshoppers chirp
as I drift off.."

i know this...well done and sweet dreams

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2003-07-13 09:49 PM

I love it. Write on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2003-07-13 09:55 PM

"Prick my finger,
on white case
gleams red."

I like that. Cool write. Great title.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-07-14 04:18 PM

Sweet dreams...James

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-07-14 04:20 PM

I dreamt of sleeping . . .
God . . I do dream of sleeping
nice job Kaoru
xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-07-14 04:33 PM

The title alone
is a poem...

well done, Kaoru

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2003-07-15 12:39 PM

superb poetic use of imagery and surrealism to create this dreamscape.
well done poetess!!

Well ... OK ... but you have to wash it first.

(bumper sticker humor) ;)

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

8 posted 2003-07-16 03:21 AM

You Know I love your writing...nuff' said.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2003-07-16 03:26 AM

I just wrote of insomnia and here I find this wonderful piece that is so smooth it might just be what I needed to get to sleep. I loved it and will recite it as a mantra and see if it helps.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

10 posted 2003-07-16 03:42 AM

sleep?
What the heck is that? Maybe if I read more of your wonderful poetry about it, I can find out?

Enjoyed...

Late at night you'll come crawling back
Just to steal a piece of me

"Default"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-07-16 04:07 AM

I have a dreamcatcher too

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-07-16 11:36 AM

argh temptress bet me to my line..damn insomniacs grin great write

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