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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Stepping back to span charred by disregard tipped shards of stale crimson drip to dormant tide and I expect no ripple or reply of consequence |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a red haze to bleed through... well done, Sir |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Duncan, this is was aweome. And hopefully ours will be too. You're not a slacker at all. (ron tends to streatch the truth) Don't it allways seem to go, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Damn ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow.. ..this one's cool.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Stepping back to span charred by disregard tipped shards of stale crimson drip to dormant tide ======================== WOOOO HOOOO....I knew it would happen sooner or later... the moth is rubbing off on you.   Did ya think I wasnt gonna catch the internal rhymes..the assonance...the hint of alliteration..the theme of aquarian influence LOL ... oh yeah...its just happends...moth muse grows on ya like a weed  Hey CaptRon...ya know whats next dont ya??? YEPPERS....  lmao |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, Dunc, don't be looking for any Ripple either.  nice alliterative write from a porch puppy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perty dern good |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very thought-provoking write, Sir. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs to ya  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-14-2003 02:06 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Dunc.... it through the red haze speaks volumes... I enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love JM's enthusiastic reply to your poem! That goes double for me!  Warm hugs & smiles, EA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I wonder how it would go if we could step back, into the place we were, and redo it? I feel this one, Dunc. Sandra |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Tell me bud... if you could step back and make it different would you really? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
tipped shards of stale crimson drip to dormant tide ================== all moth teasing aside...I just came back to say how very very cool this one is...the imagery alone is striking. Your poetry of late has taken on a new edge...its deeper...its maturing, the kind of growth that comes from when a poet peels back new muse layers..taps into new sources of emotions and influences. I dont know if any of this makes sense but to mothyme..but I do know I really like the direction your taking your poetry. [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (07-14-2003 08:46 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Simple but very powerfully written.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and I expect no ripple or reply Well shoot and damn, oh sigh~ |
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