Open Poetry #27 |
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Effigy (RP) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space ![]() |
Strip the skin tiny red ribbons fall to the floor Sewn back together an effigy I burn everyday *Muse is acting up so I thought i'd RP..just felt this today* [This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-13-2003 05:07 PM).] |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow, this is so lovely. ![]() |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Ehh... RP? your muse had gone dark, I see. ~The shivering peanut~ Don't it allways seem to go, that you don't know what you've got till' it's gone -counting crows [This message has been edited by Wind (07-13-2003 05:59 PM).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
massively phat |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Kaoru Repost RP Liz..gone dark? I never left? Yo Rebel word up G tanks for da props Boi |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . took the words right out of my mouth there Raph . . . the dark comment for some odd reason this reminded me of, "Silence of the Lambs" [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-13-2003 07:08 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sits in silence* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Sue, the stripping skin perhaps Thanks Kris |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
very glad indeed that you reposted this. I remember it well, though probably never replied the first time round. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
:good stuff: lol@rebel |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i just checked, and no i didnt reply. Oggod Sodov wouldn't either, if he knew what was good for him. yer nowt but trouble. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, now this is powerful even with few words - that's the mark of a true (and talented) poet! And the title? - perfect! Thanks for re-posting this, I missed it the first time. Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Gem both times and yeah you are standoffish ya &$^#%$ lol thanks Dixie Melissa thanks knew you'd like this one too we do it to ourselves all the time |
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