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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-14 07:50 AM

I think you straight
to the part of my brain
that sighs, not heavy
but soft.

Here you play
with stagnant water
adding the blue
crease of brow, so crystal clear.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-06-14 08:56 AM

well how lovely is that... cant ever go wrong with shades of blue and sighs.

Well done poetess gem.

Im still imagining your voice ...
can see the sparkle in your eyes.
I cant explain your power over me
Its understated understood & beautiful.
cj

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2003-06-14 09:24 AM

enjoyed.......RedStoneEB

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

3 posted 2003-06-14 10:07 AM

Nicely done, Gem. I like the phrase about thinking a person straight to the part of the brain that sighs soft. Beautiful.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-06-14 10:09 AM

Gemma, this is really pretty. A lot
said in a few words. I like that.

Hugs

Ethel Mae

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-14 11:19 AM

Gem - very cool

as in they add the life to your life
so to say . . .
insightful

quite amazing actually how your brain
works and writes these amazing lines
confuses me so - you are far beyond your years and see what most of us do not
xxoo

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

6 posted 2003-06-14 11:26 AM

lovely gem

enjoyed it alot

hugs, zenny

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2003-06-14 12:40 PM

very nice...i do so love your poetry...(i might not always say...but...i do)...h

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-06-14 12:53 PM

This is why I keep coming back for more. Amazing write gem

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-06-14 01:44 PM

I like to slowly sip the ink from your pen. That way I get to appreciate it more fully...

Huggums to a gem!
EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-06-14 02:01 PM

neat thought

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

11 posted 2003-06-15 04:09 PM

Better than water on the knee ...

... but left my heart throbbing just the same.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2008-02-02 09:33 PM

lovely descriptive words

ARCTIC WIND

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