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Open Poetry #27

You Said.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-13 03:43 PM

You know,
you could've called me.
Told me where you were going,
for hours you were gone!

You said
you'd be back in
15..
You said you'd be back in
15,
and I
counted.

In my head I'm thinking
maybe
I just need a reason to
be angry.
Without you
I'd have nothing
to complain about.

I put the music up
and turn my head from you.
Go away!
Scream those
words for you
frustrate
the balance in me.

You said
you'd
be back in 15..
You said you'd be back in
15,
and I counted.

So I
decided that I'm
tired of waiting for
someone who wouldn't
stand around for me.
So I
packed my bags and
left before you had a chance to come back.

You said you'd be back in 15,
back
in
15..
and I counted.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-07-13 03:57 PM

Feels like a song

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

2 posted 2003-07-13 06:23 PM

"So I
packed my bags and
left before you had a chance to come back."

You're too young for this -- keep counting -- but grant pardons often

life's short and you're a long time dead

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-07-13 06:44 PM

Whats the opposite of patience? Impatience...no its 15 minutes?
Was this 15 minutes, hours, days, months or years...James

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

4 posted 2003-07-13 06:58 PM

Powerful write Kaoru, and I agree with Rebel on this one...you are way too young for this!!

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