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The River of You
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The River of You |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack 
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Coward hide behind your muse cry of a broken heart after shattering those around you Lonely as you drive Love away and whine to anyone desperate enough to pity you Dark as a dirty closet afraid of light and what it may expose Asleep what will it take to awaken you from fantasy and finally face reality Prisoner I need'nt condemn you you've done it yourself may you show yourself no mercy Deceitful speaking of truth while spewing venom repeating... till you believe your own lies Jealous you point the finger yet you drown in the river of you . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Coward hide behind your muse cry of a broken heart after shattering those around you yes, my thoughts for a friend today too very well said |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Escape escape ... are the feelings this write brought to me. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God Mike, who has done this to you! What an awful person Sorry you had to write this but soooo glad you have xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Jealous you point the finger yet you drown in the river of you Good venting dreambuilder! I'm sorry your pen is raging with ink! Let it bleed dude! Nothing wrong with being honest to a fault, and if there is..(fill in the blanks)  [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-14-2003 08:14 PM).] |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
mhmm...ive been thinking lots of the same lately. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Deceitful speaking of truth while spewing venom repeating... till you believe your own lies I hate it when someone lies.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I feel ya |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
Boy oh Boy! Never take life too seriously - None of us gets out alive! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Goddess - I believe you know the meaning of this poem - thank you -smiles Janette - yep... exactly Sue - what can I say - thankyou . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (07-15-2003 06:10 PM).] |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Blues - venting is good - I'm a scorpio if I didnt vent there would be a problem - lol KoKo - sorry to hear that, but glad you could relate Ethel - me too!!!! thanks for the hug Passing shadows - thank you Mick - I was wondering when a guy would reply - I was beginning to think too many of them felt guilty - lol Thanks for reading everybody - Mike . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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