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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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“You cleaned out your closet and got organized. That’s what I like, Grandma…organization.” For being just eleven, sometimes I have to remember she is still a child and not really an old soul in a small, petite body, so, orderliness must skip generations… for I want to take charge of more than my shelves and files I want to systematize my brain of their thoughts, which ramble and sputter, although someone recently said, "This is quite miraculous, you know. The way your thoughts flow like this." Flow? Spitter, perhaps, like flat rocks thrown across a placid lake, only to kerplunk when gravity holds hard, then pulls, leaving a barely glimpsed, albeit brief insight, then out of sight below blue ripples thoughts hidden again, now obscure below a moon-path’s surface, a silent dare to jump in to where the drowning words still float so, no more charge of my affairs on the outside of controlled for my thoughts shall remain rippled and soaked, and strictly chaotic in their final saturation |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
for my thoughts shall remain rippled and soaked, and strictly chaotic in their final saturation And that is a good thing! Smiling at you. Patricia |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...agreeing with Patricia. A very good friend has recently reminded me that that IS a very good thing.  Enjoyed this one, Karilea. Hugs to you,  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-12-2003 10:55 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea: this is beautiful and yes a good thing indeed . . . please pass some of your thoughts my way xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...I hear you calling me to, come on in the water's fine....and it is! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Karilea sunshine I love your words. below a moon-path’s surface, a silent dare to jump in to where the drowning words still float Wow! Love, Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
for my thoughts shall remain rippled and soaked, and strictly chaotic in their final saturation A sensational write Karilea... It is always amazing to me how we find ourselves standing outside the pool...and what we want is to jump into the very middle. Hugs, TD |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
gush chaotic then thoughts aught not rummage around in dusty attics but touch acoustic cahoots  Don't tell me to get a life -- I have one on backorder. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is fantastic...and I'm keeping it!! ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Beautiful, Sunshine. Warm hugs, Etain. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Sunshine: first of all - I find it hard to believe you are a grandma - though you have the heart, you do not have the appearance also being an organizational freak - I too hate how my brain works -------------------------------------------- I want to systematize my brain of their thoughts, which ramble and sputter, -------------------------------------------- excellent write karilea I loved it and look forward to more DQ . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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