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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-07-12 08:46 PM

Landslide down the ambient well
Dipper deep, ridged parallel
Looking, inner scope to find
Turnstile ticking, pulse and wind

~Captured in a black box~

Varied colors lift the sheer
Drops and ripples waters clear
Looking, under spreading leaves
Bells with bows beneath green sleeves

~Watcher of the tick tocks~

Pitch and brimstone corner caves
Dusty ash spent storm crashed waves
Vapored passage in the sun
Dangled giggles, kite undone

~Radiant in moon glow~

Ribbons wander green to blue
Silver edges fine lined dew
Caverned yearning deep flushed spree
Through the center lands set free

~Miracles of mind flow~

Copyright Kkh 7/12/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (07-12-2003 08:48 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-12 08:48 PM

This is really cool!
Great write, within a write

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2003-07-12 08:59 PM

This is great. Much enjoyed.
Sandra

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-07-12 09:36 PM

if only to empty this mind and start over again...
this is different for you, but real good and isightful as usual, diamondgirl

D'sWhisper
Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 68
Washington, USA

4 posted 2003-07-12 09:41 PM

Oh how my tongue enjoyed this!
A word pattern lavish
and rich...
fun to read and I liked the content. ~DW~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-07-12 09:58 PM

~Miracles of mind flow~

Kathleen, this poem certainly is a
"miracles of mind flow" and it is
absolutely beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-07-12 10:06 PM

very nicely written,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2003-07-12 10:46 PM

TD...your mind and pen flowed beautifully with this verse.

Patricia

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-07-13 03:21 AM

flow on, flow on!

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