Open Poetry #27 |
Falling Deeper In Love With You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
The sun rose at the crack of dawn To signal a brand new day The earth was bathed in sunshine Until the clouds moved in to stay Up above dark clouds were looming About to give birth to the rain But there was music in my heart And it was love I sought to gain The seagulls looked for shelter Amongst the clifftops by the sea And I was nestled in your arms The perfect place for me to be We sat and watched the light show Until finally the sun broke through And as I looked into your eyes I fell deeper in love with you * * * "When I'm falling in love no safety net is required" I am in motion |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue: have missed you here indeed! This is beautiful Goddd and the safety net? Good for you xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is beautiful...flow and images. Great! Patricia |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful and lyrical. Great job! Eric |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
beautiful write,,, A voice of honesty |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, Sue. And this is one of my favorite pictures, too. This is so happy. Sandra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue, as always, I loved the romance in your poem. Trust all is well with you. I miss you and hope we can catch up soon. Hugs, Marti |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Thanks for sending this to me. Just a lovely poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always beautiful you give me hope |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
We sat and watched the light show Until finally the sun broke through And as I looked into your eyes I fell deeper in love with you Sue, when I think that I can't fall in love any deeper, it seems I do. But, I love it, too. Hugs Ethel |
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