shadow's sway (a duet with Edder)

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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0 posted 2003-07-12 11:24 AM

I walked a path of wander
in hopes of finding me
but often went asunder
on a trail of fantasy.

I was steadfast--foot-by-foot
until she came my way.
Now I'm left to wonder
where sanity did stray
for in this quest I stumbled
on darkened path of gray
tangled in her roots
this heart she took as prey,
Watch ye now and pray the root--
set you free again--
take my heart and steal my pen
say i can have any man
tell me can I live this way?
and watch the shadow's sway...

as the light
recedes the limb
knowing I
cannot have him...

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-12 11:28 AM

fantastick. Or however that's spelled, but together you guys are brilliant.

still trying to crack the html code

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2003-07-12 01:04 PM

wow...I love this one, good duet you two make!

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-07-12 04:44 PM

Wonderful piece of writing. Congrats on your duet...

Patricia

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

4 posted 2003-07-12 05:51 PM

Ok the first four lines caught me
truly amazing . . .
and the last . . .
well . . . awesome writing you two!
Two beautiful people indeed
xxoo

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

5 posted 2003-07-13 05:15 PM

thanks everyone. Karen is pure genius, it was a pleasure to work with her.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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6 posted 2003-07-13 06:06 PM

pshaw Ed. Genius? Hardly.

If you hadn't cleaned up my mess, it would be, WELL, A MESS

It was FUN tho. I'll be looking forward to our next collaboration!

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

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Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2003-07-13 10:08 PM

You guys make an absolutely wonderfully unique duet!! love it, you too! Great job

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

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Southern Abstentia

8 posted 2003-07-14 12:49 PM

and there's the rub aint it?

bless ye two

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2003-07-14 12:56 PM

Hm...well, I read this before and thought I replied,
but I guess I'm slacking..lol.
I really do love this...very awesome duet.
Hugs to you both,
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-07-14 07:25 AM

And all the quantity in the world doesn't matter if the quality eludes. *S*

I enjoyed this very much... great collaboration! *S*

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