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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-12 10:08 AM

In Blue Of Now

It's there inside my waiting heart
the moment's wish, the dream to live,
the overtones that understate
rebelling 'gainst the want to give.

And yet it's there inside my mind
the planned unplanned, the waiting love.
The day that ends that wall of time
collapsed in right, the capture of.

Winding words to will the want,
to canvas calm creating care.
The less of time to carry on
inviting stolen thoughts to share.

It's there, right here, these words do vow,
If only read in blue of now.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Martie

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1 posted 2003-07-12 10:17 AM

Maureen

"The day that ends that wall of time
collapsed in right, the capture of."

I enjoyed your words at play today!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-12 10:43 AM

Winding words to will the want,
to canvas calm creating care.
The less of time to carry on
inviting stolen thoughts to share.

It's there, right here, these words do vow,
If only read in blue of now.

Maureen, a beautiful and heartfelt poem. Written
as only you can....just beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2003-07-12 01:07 PM

love this....bittersweet

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-07-12 02:58 PM

beautiful..very captivating.

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2003-07-12 03:42 PM

great write M
and yes i see the blue

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-07-12 03:46 PM

Love this, Maureen.
Beautifully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2003-07-12 04:54 PM

Maureen...this is a great write. Keep writing the pain, my friend. You will work it out through your pen.

Patricia

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-07-12 05:02 PM

Martie, thank you, I was "playing" with the words today *s.

Dixie,...bittersweet once again, huh?

Kaoru, thank you. I was trying to be...
Thank you Ethel. I appreciate you very much.
Your happiness spreads throughout these pages.

Glad you enjoyed it V~ I had a few moments this morning to think on the next few days.

hugss
M

Thank you Patricia, I am well over the pain of losing. Now it's survival time. Sometimes people see us together and don't even think we are divorcing.

But this poem had nothing to do with him

And I wish I had someone still calling.

M

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