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Open Poetry #27

Loving you And helping you Through

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-07-12 02:25 AM

Feelings?

Flowing within
Breaking the surface
Filling me with strange sensations

My heart calls out to you
Whispers your name
To the wind of time
Hoping…
Hoping it will find
It’s way into your mind

Suddenly Within
Your misty blue eyes
Light my darkness inside
Flooding my mind
Opening my heart
Entering my soul

Staring back I send my love I hold
Flowing towards you
Is the love?
The love I hold for you

You whitish skin
So soft
So tender
So light
Covered in the silks
Of passion

Laid upon a bed of rose petal
You await me
Surround by the flicker
Of eternal burning candlelight

You’re blackish-red hair
Brushed against your cheeks
Flowing over tears of the past
Covering the pain
You wish you never had

Longing for my touch
That someone to hold
As your tears start once more

So gentle
I wipe the tears away
Filling your mind with safeness
As your pain drifts outwards

You wrap your arms tight
Around me tonight
I whisper
“ I love you and everything’s alright”

Holding you close
Letting our souls merge as one
Feelings join together
And our love for one another
Overpowers the pain inside you hold tonight

Waiting slowly for
Sleep to flow through are veins
And travel to our minds
Everything will fades into our worlds inside…

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2003-07-12 02:31 AM

Woah, this is good

I love the way you've got emotion in here but at the same time are telling someone's story.

Skyfire owns you - Stinky Twinky

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-07-12 03:02 AM

just gorgeous! very romantic!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-07-12 02:02 PM

This is very tender and speaks of true deep closeness, oneness.
Very beautiful write, Lee.
Love, Margherita

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-07-12 03:19 PM

What a lovely write, Lee.
I really enjoyed reading this.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2003-07-12 06:36 PM

Well my feathered friend...enjoyed this write very much... and there isn't one "and" there. Well Done.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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