Open Poetry #27 |
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Standard Process of Afternoon Madness |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA ![]() |
Let me pick your eye apart why see it this way? forget me so kinky i'm laying straight missing the face I can't forget It shouldn't be this leftover dinner keep it mother I don't need it anymore lost the leaving missing feeling like I'm here set on forgetting you fingers face the dial don't call wait wait. |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
i really really liked this. it was just great, i enjoyed it. ri *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hey Gem, I mustve missed you again. I know who this is about, so don't even THINK of picking up the phone. Ok, enough words from the peanut gallery, I loved your poem. I'm off to find your other ones, If you have any If art is still inside, I feel it |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
thanks riley, very much. ![]() Liz. yes mum, i know i shouldnt, and dont want to either really. its his call, not mine. he he. na, i just want an end to this madness, and i lie in bed thinking of giving in, just for some peace of mind. ![]() thanks for ya constant support m friend. if i look like i'm getting too soft on him, knock me out ![]() love ya windy! |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
when did you stop in? when I was sharing my sarcasm with the people in poetry challenge? lol, you should read the thread, it's hillarious. Haven't you written anything new? I need more deppressed Gem madness If art is still inside, I feel it |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Gemma, ![]() I've missed you the last couple of days. I've just run in for a little while and had to leave....company is here. ![]() Little lady, you do what your heart tells you is right. Okay? That is what will be the best...but you know that, don't you? Remember, we're just an e-mail away if you need us. ![]() "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I'll go look, i was reading and adding to the thread about your list of things on your desk. grrrr cats and their tails, cause havok dont they?i end up screeeeaming at mine whe he tries to sit on me, its always when youre really trying to do something. ![]() Ethel Mae...i know, youre right, but i'm sitting this one out. I wondered why you havent been here. i dont like it when youre not. but have fun with your visitors. speak to ya soon. xxxx |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
You may realize, after all is said and done, the Madness is not in the "want" but in the "having" ... ... just laying straight. Life's adventures ARE only a dream ahead. Be strong of heart, and sound of soul. *S oxox |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool gemma, I always love reading you....very cool write |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Cool write, I liked the first line.. |
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