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In a breeze
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
In a breeze Sometimes even in the strangest places when I see the bowing of summer grasses or the ripples in a celebration banner I know it is the same ghost of wind that is there with you in your silk in that offshore breeze s.a.g. © 062703 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
romantic but sort of sad |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
sad, p.s.? not meant to be, must be the "ghost" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...this has kind of a lonely feeling to it, a missing something or another, a void filled by wind as only wind can do if there's nothing else yeah...may just be the ghost  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Things Just Things there are things that can not be dismissed that we share like the moon the earth and the breeze |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
It feels lonely to me... but that could be my mood... Enjoyed it muchly  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
S Arthur I feel the same way about the moon. This is lovely! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I get a sense of connection...I feel that way about the moon, too, never thought about the wind....I will now... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write S Arthur bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
p.s., How about "pensive"? Even "melancholy" would seem strong for what I was thinking. Thanks for your interest. 1, I love to respond in verse and it is really nice to be on the receiving end too, Thanks a bunch!  Sky, Glad you enjoyed. Martie, Thank you. Kahlil, The wind is everywhere and passes by us all. bslicker, Thank you. s.a.g. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
smooooooooooooooch |
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