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When Trees Dream
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When Trees Dream |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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they are sponges of darkness devouring the sunset, turning blacker than the sky they build a fence upon, they sweep the heavens and brush the stars, thru their filagreed leaves they release the morning, pregnant with apples ripe with dreams [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-10-2003 06:37 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very excellent write,,, A voice of honesty |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
they sweep the heavens and brush the stars, thru their filagreed leaves they release the morning Michele, I love that part especially. It's very pretty.  "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - for reasons unknown I like trees, especially the willow, nice write... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: when I need answers, I lie on the grass and look up between the trees swaying in the wind . . . I love to do this and this brought me back there . . . this is beautiful xxoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess pregnant with apples ripe with dreams excellent.  |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
blacker than the sky they build a fence upon thats a great line i like this, thanks. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I do digital photography and have captured the image of trees and there beauty and there majestic silence. Good one. Bon-Bon |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
well your trees are different than mine: none of mine have leaves. I love the images you bring in this At sunset I've won or lost. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love those last two lines Michele |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
pregnant with apples ripe with dreams sigh. you do wow me every time lady. your sharp, creative mind makes for beautiful writes. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Mish you had to be a Celt in another life. You have such a reverance and love for trees. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very pleasant view of night. Enjoyed very much. [This message has been edited by mirror man (07-10-2003 02:33 PM).] |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Cutesy poem....like this line: pregnant with apples ripe with dreams reminds me of the Wizard of OZ.....a movie fav of mine. Got to watch it for the umpteenth time this weekend. Pretty much know all the lines by heart....guess I have to get a life! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
pregnant with apples ripe with dreams Wow, what imagery alone in these two lines. Keeping this. Maree  fate is not just |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"pregnant with apples ripe with dreams" _______________________ I have to agree with the others - those two lines are brilliant. Your imagery is this is outstanding. This is a keeper~ Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
wow...can we say excellent? I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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