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heavy
New Member

since 2003-07-12

Posts 4

0 posted 2003-07-12 01:26 AM

hello. im new here... anyway, heres a poem.

you believe

in the darkness i weep
to naked gods and invisible deamons.
do i hate enough?

in tattered clothes and costume jewelry
i parade my farce... and you believe
my little joke on the world and you believe
am i pretty?

i pull and pinch at my skin
its too tight
i dont like the style
its and ugly colour
its restricting
its restraining

full of holes and furturistic ink
i make it mine
and you still believe
i am pretty

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-07-12 01:47 AM

heavy - welcome, your writing is very descriptive. I'm waiting to read more of them...

BC

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2003-07-12 01:53 AM

we all like to look our best I think
most of the time.....and the rest our reflection in the mirror might know...hehe
welcome to Passions..look forward to reading more

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-12-2003 01:54 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-12 02:02 AM

Welcome to Passions!

Looking forward to reading more of you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-07-12 08:58 AM

Welcome to Passions! Please, check your
E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-07-12 09:08 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

6 posted 2003-07-12 09:32 AM

welcome to passions, i can't wait to read more..

riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-07-12 11:14 AM

I enjoyed reading your first post and
look forward to reading more. And,

Hugs

Ethel...garysgirl

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-07-12 11:18 AM

Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy the many fine word artists here, and the great variety of styles of writing.
Smile back at your mirrored reflection, for being smart enough to join this board.

HELLO, and WELCOME

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