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Open Poetry #27

Heart's Sorrow

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-07-11 10:13 PM

There's nothing greater than your love,
You were sent to me from Heaven above.
Each second not spent with you,
Is a second I can't renew.
Missing you when you're away,
Finding myself broken where I lay.
Remembering your sweet little smile,
Makes my wait worth the while.
Picturing your twinkling eyes,
Lights up the darkest of my skies.
And as I sit awaiting your return,
The fire inside me continues to burn.
Wishing you were here with me,
You're all I can seem to see.
The time away is my heart's sorrow.

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-07-11 10:18 PM

Very very beautiful Kyle...
Much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Blush
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 56
Ky

2 posted 2003-07-12 12:30 PM

Nicely done
I just posted my first poems here today
Hoping you drop by and see me too
Susan~

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-07-12 03:28 AM

Wonderful write...Welcome to Passions!

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