Open Poetry #27 |
Saturday Night Dance Party |
Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
I sincerely hope this poem doesn't offend anyone, It was not written in that manner Saturday Night Dance Party By Paul Wilson The invitation said come as you are food for all…with an open bar Come dance to your favorite song with an offer like that, how could we go wrong The band played all those songs from the past just like before, one slow one fast The party was going great even though some of the guest arrived late Out on the dance floor with lights turned down low was Magnus and Enchantress, they were giving it a go There was Ron and Nan singing along with the band just like Sonny and Cher hand in hand Standing by the bar was Marge drinking a cherry coke next to her was Bill Charles…having a smoke The next song was a ladies choice as she asked Bill with a shy voice The dance floor was crowded and the music was slow Couples wrapped in each others arms yanno Serenity had her eye on that guy called Squirrel so he took her by the hand and gave her a twirl Cpat Ron and Mysteria were dancing in the dark He was asking here if she wanted to go park He said he would drive her home tonight together they could dance under the moon light The band was playing a fast one now as Seymour told Kit he would show her how Out on the floor they were doing the twist he told her… just shake your hips like this Balladeer had his eye on that cutie called Sunshine he told Toerag she sure can dance fine They danced till their feet were sore then they danced some more The band took a break, but not for long cause everybody wanted to hear their favorite song The mood was just right for a party tonight until Toerag and Balladeer got in a fight The nurse came in, turned on the light and broke up the fight sorry folks she announced no more dancing tonight Everyone says this retirement home is the best cause on Saturday night nobody gets any rest "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (07-11-2003 09:35 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cute write Paul... It's so good to have you home! ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Nancy~~~Thank you. I've written more poems this past week than I have in the last 3-4 months, so I guess I'm getting back in the groove. I may have to write a part 2 to this one maybe a day trip for the crew or something.Glad you enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Paul - I don't believe anyone would take offense to this writing. This is most charming and just written well... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
YOU are SO cute. and yep, I've always had my eye on the squirrel. (Rumor has it, I collect NUTS.) chuckle... so good to have you home sweet Paulie!!! and dance. much fun! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill...Thanks, glad you enjoyed this little piece of silliness. I figured I would put that dis-claimer at the top to cover my A_ _ Take Care...Paul Serenity~~~ Did you say you collect NUTS or you were NUTS??? Yanno those squirrels, they like to hide their nuts till winter time. Thanks for the sweet reply.I guess you notice my name wasen't included in this little ditty, somebody had to keep the rest of you in line.Glad you liked it...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
ROFL ... Paul, this was delightful! What a great flow, and the visuals had me grinning. LOL ... I'd love to twist the night away! Well done, really enjoyed this, and a great "twist" at the end! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Funny, somehow I was hearing the strains of Saturday Night Fever, and come in to find this! Too cute, Paul! Great job! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kit & Sunshine... Glad you both enjoyed. I tried to revise it a little, but it was past the 24 hours, so this is a little different than the finished product. Thanks for reading...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That Toerag's just a troublemaker Every body knows! He told my Sunshine she had wrinkles In her pantyhose!! I had to rise to her defense - I don't do that for many Especially when she blurted out She wasn't wearing any!!! But that's ok. Some pepper in His Preparation H will work. It couldn't happen to a nicer guy Or bigger JERK!!! Ya done good, Paul. This was well-written and a lot of fun! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Paul, LOL, how very clever of you to dream this one up, and I love to see they were playing one slow, one fast, (need that littel break now at my age>) Thank you so kindly for including me in your poem I think it is adorable absolutely perfect! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Michael...You made my night with your reply.ROFLMAO Thank you for taking time to reply...Paul Mysteria...Glad you enjoyed. Even my old bones need a rest now and then. Maybe one day we can all get together and have a Saturday Night Dance Party while we can still cut a rug. Thanks for your sweet reply...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Paul Wilson../\..indeed, very nice; a very pleasant poem../\..Spiros ------------calm------------- |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Spiros...Thank you very much for taking time to read & reply. Glad you liked it...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
very cute poem. ~bjw~ ~To see the world in a grain of sand |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
barbaraj...Thanks for taking time to read and reply. Glad you enjoyed it...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"I've Got You, Babe..." - This is wonderful, Paul - Thanks for taking time to kindly honor our Passionate folks... Cute poem, sir... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Nan...Thanks for not being offended that I used your name.Glad you liked it and thanks for reading and your kind reply...Paul There is a slightly revised version of this that I might repost in # 28 later on. "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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