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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-07-11 01:26 PM

Happy earth looks upon evening and sea
Laying between spirits light and memory
Brighter than any burning gold
Discussing thoughts with times of old

Which passes floating images into my mind
As I listen in…
A path of thought which born drops of sadness or bliss begin
Enchanting shapes of wandering mists
Twilight-Lawns, illumining waves of silver lights
Bequeath the wake of dawn, enchanting perpetual flows

Then to….
Storms gathering, fragments clearing despair, loss, suffering and pain
Deep into the deep down of my soul

But then love remember love
A countenance of caregivers filling
Many seats of immortal courage
Flowers still living there flourish
Altering radiance in all emotions ascending
Guiding with dove like eyes of hope
A radiance of beauty which changes and knows
Like music floating on the wind
Sinking through foundations of willfulness
Diminishing the interest of woeful thoughts
Complementing every aspect of life
Moving through your vein this harmony
While happy earth looks upon all this time

So evening lies between memory and spirit light
Brighter then any burning gold
Discussing thought with time and ocean

While I smile & remember his embracing hold

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-07-11 01:28 PM

Warm remembrances shared so poetically.

May your part of this Earth always be happy!

EA

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-11 01:30 PM

very well written and held my interest from start to end,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Blush
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 56
Ky

3 posted 2003-07-11 05:13 PM

Interesting and beautiful to boot
Loved this
Just posted my first 4 new ones here today
Hoping you drop by and see me too
Susan~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-07-11 05:39 PM

"So evening lies between memory and spirit light
Brighter then any burning gold
Discussing thought with time and ocean

While I smile & remember his embracing hold"

So very very beautiful..
From the title to the closing lines here..
I absolutely love this piece!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

5 posted 2003-07-12 02:56 AM

Enjoyed this very much.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-12 03:06 AM

I feel like a jerk for not replying much to your stuff Lee...I just have less time and even less patience with my eyes now, and tend to lean towards the shorter poems

but I do enjoy what I get to read of yours

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