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Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

0 posted 2003-07-10 05:32 PM

Just look at the mess I’m in,
I’d have to take fire
And let it burn
For all that I’ve done

And you had me wondering
You never change,
Do you?
You were always the same

Pull me from an aircrash:
I’m still alive,
Only my wings are broken,
You just let me sink deeper

And the machine takes over

You’ll have to destroy
What you’ve made,
Or let me go

And you have me wondering
If you ever change

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-10-2003 06:07 PM).]

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

1 posted 2003-07-10 05:46 PM

powerful emotions displayed here - a powerful poem - Paul

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

2 posted 2003-07-10 05:59 PM

Excellent Poem...Enjoyed reading this.

Anwaar

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-07-10 06:00 PM

Thank's to both of you

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

4 posted 2003-07-10 06:05 PM

Great poem. keep on writting.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-07-10 06:34 PM

I got tha shivers with this one miss. Some people never change, and no matter how many times you die inside, they will never come to your rescue. I swear you read my thoughts.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-07-10 06:38 PM

Wonderful write ..loved it.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

7 posted 2003-07-10 06:41 PM

Thanks. I appreciate your replys

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-07-11 07:48 PM

reading my mind Liz . . .
this is amazing

You’ll have to destroy
What you’ve made,
Or let me go

And you have me wondering
If you ever change

xxoo

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-07-11 07:55 PM

Powerful write Liz!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

10 posted 2003-07-11 08:00 PM

Thanks for enjoying my little ...whatever it is

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

11 posted 2003-07-11 09:31 PM

A very powerful write.

Patricia

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-07-11 09:34 PM

Well, I hope you never change from being the sweet, caring, creative young woman that you are!

EA

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2003-07-12 01:07 AM

Wind - sometimes they never do change...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-07-12 02:22 AM

very deep, touching...made me think about myself

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