Open Poetry #27 |
Ad dress ing My Nakedness |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ad dress ing My Nakedness It was years before, and the choice was not mine. I was captured, enamored by the sounds of silent words. I rode the Kaleidoscope of rides, the ever changing sense of feels, the widespread thoughts that would narrow me down to you. And I glowed in the evening's rush as each turn of you, produced a new color in me, a startling brightness, a flickering of hope. Was it all just an illusion? I think not. As in each phase produced, my heart would grow and learn and even resist, if the challenge became too great, with little reward. Like paycheck to paycheck, I live day to day, dreams on hold with only naked thoughts, my path of words, to adorn me. I've used up my three wishes, the genie has returned to her lamp that now rests upon my shelf, worn from the rubbings, my touches, that have outlived their use. I picture you daily in the oddest ways, making it easier to do without but still bringing a smile to these lips that know no other's kisses. The Lady often rises in me, and the mirror has begun to please the other side, too. It's just we-three, who have finally learned to get along, knowing we can handle the loss but wishing it were different if only time would address my nakedness, some day. M *A Friday Morning Ramble... "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
M, this is a keeper nice write A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Addressing your nakedness?..Can I lick your stamp? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Bernie. And Toerag, that is probably the best ofer I have had in years funny guy, you are M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was simply beautiful in the absolution of your heart, the humbleness and understanding...I gotta tell you, this guy lost a very rare gem...God bless you and keep you safe in the hours of love...always... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your nakedness is infinitely beautiful... EA |
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