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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the kitchen the cookbook is closed Creating by taste, by feel and by mood Likewise, concoctions poetic composed The mind into cosmos, the senses conclude If not to my taste, then empty me why? For empty is all and nothing is more Rule out the forfeit and rule out the lie The mind creates wonder not yet written for In rattle or riddle or subtle subdue Creating in simmer, in simmer For what must come forth most likely will do The soup warm to nourish not primer In the kitchen the cookbook is closed By art is the subject, the wide-eyed expanse The pen and the pallet twin born predisposed The soup that is made feeds the broad circumstance Copyright Kkh 7/10/03 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And your "soup" is always delectable and food for the soul!  Warm hugs, EA |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
Nice poem. Don't be discourage when you don't get a lot of replies. That should encourage you to just try harder! This poem is making me hungry. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I'll be right over!!! You make the soup and I'll bake some Finnish flatbread! YUMMY!!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
delicious imagination here  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Absolutely love the rhythm of this and the language you've used to weave your concoctions. Well done!But not so well done that it's become tough and dry...it's just right! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
what a surprise!!! i was just thinking about a homemade soup,, and bingo your write has me cooking...  A voice of honesty |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Nourishment for my soul, TD. This is wonderful. I think I shall go back for another bowl! Patricia |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, it feels like homemade soup , not the campbells variety that i am guilty of......very hearty words and so so clever as always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever! |
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