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Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-14 12:32 PM

  take my heart
  tear it apart
  make sure you just
  return to sender
  when your done

  i am tired of your
  constant puns
  tired of this situation
  tired of your aggervation

  please just leave me alone
  just leave me alone i like
  to be alone so i can just zone

   as my hands cover
   my tear shed head cant
   take back what has been
   spoken or what you have said

   standing along the shores
   of the line i think of the
   time the watch that slowly ticks
   away

   and heart feels like its
   just all falling apart i will hold
   my head up high i will not die i
   will live long.....yes i will survive!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

1 posted 2003-06-14 12:33 PM

Very well written

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2003-06-14 12:38 PM

Thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-14 04:55 AM

this one hurts, but good ending

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2003-06-14 03:24 PM

let me tell you,it hurt me to. but the beauty of poetry

gets all of my negative feelings out of me. like a good cleaning

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-06-15 03:56 PM

Very powerful.
Eric

NickTofteland
Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 74
MN, USA

6 posted 2003-06-15 06:23 PM

Very moving... so many painful emotions are expressed here.

________________________________________

   and heart feels like its
   just all falling apart i will hold
   my head up high i will not die i
   will live long.....yes i will survive
________________________________________

I am reminded of a specific female african-american musician... hmmm... who could it be?

[This message has been edited by NickTofteland (06-15-2003 06:25 PM).]

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

7 posted 2003-06-16 12:53 PM

hehe,yea that last line i thought of that song lol

pain is my life so i write what i know

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-02-03 12:29 PM

Powerful Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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