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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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too much to share words no longer wish to come, the reasons once no longer there the heart felt thoughts are put aside the emptiness too much to share for only words can fill my thoughts the feelings never touch-me-more when words no longer wish to come it's time to close that crack of door and mend to heal that emptiness that rises each and every day with only words to memory bash and load the heavy, shoulder's stay slowly, time has passed too soon the moments swear the seconds gain and all that's left are words unsaid as I begin my end, refrain. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sad but very beatufiully written |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
M another one that you have wrote well  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (07-10-2003 11:59 AM).] |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very sad, yes. If it's writer's block, try rewriting one of your old poems (just a thought). [This message has been edited by mirror man (07-10-2003 02:19 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Lee and Bernie, and MM, I never have writer's block, I just don't wish to write so negative right now. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-10-2003 04:43 PM).] |
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Jennis#1 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 112IL, Usa |
Great piece of work. |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Sad but very nicely written...almost reminds me of Emily Bronte's "I am the only Being" Great work ... and I like your rhyming scheme. anwaar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen that is a great piece of writing, considering you don't want to write. Anyway, I understand the feelings. Hugs Sandra |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful writing Maureen for only words can fill my thoughts the feelings never touch-me-more when words no longer wish to come it's time to close that crack of door xxoo |
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