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She Knows Me Well |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Blue ice nestled ancient monoliths loom a vale for me to see mirrored reflection of sky and sea crystal sliver of peace embracing me As I plunge uncharted water I am her daughter [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-04-2003 01:35 AM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I like this Sue, a vivid picture you painted. Jason |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of my daughter |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very intense and beautiful write ..... fantastic poetry. Love, Margherita  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very spiritual and timely - filled with light i am her daugher, too |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Your words always hold the hint of a greater mystery. Leaving me wanting to dive in farther. Eric |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like the way you did this. Very smooth and lovely. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly lovely Sue! Enjoyed this so very much this sunny morn. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just beautiful! Patricia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I loved your poem--and Eric's reply! That's ditto for me! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
As I plunge uncharted water ...sounds familiar...love the way you presented it. hugs M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sue - just remember to come up for air! Wonderful write. Chris  "Said you'd give me light... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - and a daughter with one lovely smile... BC |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
How beautiful!!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
littlewing...there is a lovely feeling to this, touched with spirit. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you truly are nthe water's daughter as we are all sons and daughters to the Mother! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Argh! I thought I'd responded to this. I still have to give you my interpretation though I'm sure it's off i just captured a feeling for something through these beautiful images |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Beautiful words Sue.....i like it a lot Goldenrose. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thanks again sue.. Goldenrose. [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (07-05-2003 08:13 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Jason, ahhh if you could see the picture I was looking at . . . thank you Dixie - what a nice thought - glad it did for you thank you Thanks Margherita . . . means so much from you - you know that thank you Michele - yes . . you are thank you Eric - what a beautiful response! Dive in please . . . thank you Sandra - wow - thank you so much Thanks Patricia - like to see you here Thank you Linda - I have missed reading you - havent been online as much as I was Maureen - sounds familiar ahaha yes I bet it does thank you Chris, I use scuba gear . . . thank you Bill - now what am I to say to that? You always leave such a beautiful response for me - always making that smile brighter thank you Bill Thank you Lee! Thank you James, silky - I like that Martie - spirit indeed . . . glad you can see that - thank you Noah - you always hit it right on the nose -always always reading further into the words - yep you got it and thank you Raph - I doubt very highly your interpretation is off . . . making me smile knowing something I wrote left you with such thoughts thank you xxoo Hey Phil. thank you TWICE lol I am glad you enjoyed Thanks guys xxoo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
unfortunately I'm my mother's daughter....I forgave but doesn't mean I still have to love her or like her...you have a way with words you know this by now!!  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Nice write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Kris, but yes . . . you are a daughter of Mother Earth indeed Thank you Thomas! Thanks guys xxoo |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
reminded me of Yosemite & many other memories nature unifies the mind, body, & soul back to where it began where we gain insight & understanding with such ease that it makes us realize we are one . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Mike You are so sweet to me Yes we are all one indeed thank you xxoo |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
lovely |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you hoot - is so good to see you reading me xxoo |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Excellent, Sue, in the capture of understanding even in the chaos of life. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This is absolutely awesome. Great job. We see the light of those |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How did I miss replying to this? Especially since I've read it twice. uncharted waters my kind of travel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Soleil - thank you so much! Brad - thank you Thanks V! LOL Kacy - yes they are indeed thanks guys xxoo |
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