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Open Poetry #27

Do you Care?

LukeatNFFC
Junior Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 42
Nottingham, England

0 posted 2003-07-10 08:01 AM

Could be called a Love Poem I suppose...

Do You Care?-

If i died,
Would you care?
Would you stand
And Watch me there?

Would you stand,
Above my grave,
As I scream-
The Devil's Slave?

Tears streaming down your face,
Do you care? oh
Silent Beauty, Silent Grace,
Would you care?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-07-10 01:18 PM

Hope you got the answer you needed.
Have a great week, and once again, WELCOME!

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

2 posted 2003-07-10 01:28 PM

I often wonder if people would care should I die but I'm too afraid of the answer. Good poem, it ryhmes nicely for the most part.

Sometimes you can't change what's going to happen but you can change how you percieve it.

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