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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-13 11:09 PM


When Adam and Eve sinned
Death was brought upon
Every generation
Until the end

But GOD loved us so much
That he didn't want that
Type of future for us
So he sent his only begotten son
In our behalves
To atone what Adam and Eve did

Jesus suffered for us
He was spit on
Had to wear a crown of thorns
Go in front of people
Without his outer garment on
He was spoken down to
He even had to carry his own stake

Jesus had to endure
Being nailed
Hand and feet to a stake
But he did all this for us
And for his father
GOD
Who loved us so much
He watched his son suffer for us

What love he had for us

Cold hands means a warm heart

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-06-13 11:15 PM


very beautiful write,,,

QjQ

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2003-06-13 11:35 PM


Still not as much love as I feel when I think about you Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
3 posted 2003-06-13 11:43 PM


thank you for your comment
this is a beautifull poem, although i have no religion, but this still was amazing


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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4 posted 2003-06-14 04:59 AM


cool write
El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
5 posted 2003-06-14 08:23 AM


Yes, God loved us that much, and more. Not only did Jesus die for us, but every day He's leading us home...

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
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6 posted 2003-07-23 02:31 AM



Your love of God shines through in this piece, Julie.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
7 posted 2003-07-23 02:36 AM


Jesus is the worthiest man to ever have lived.
Even greater in heaven is he now.
Praise be to him and thanks for the psalms you gave.

Jai

timothysangel1973
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8 posted 2003-07-23 04:39 AM


Amen!

This is so beautiful, going in the library!

Bless that sweet soul of yours.

A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one.
-Majorie Kinnan Rawlings-

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2003-07-23 05:01 AM


Like the way you told this...reminded me of the song..."I love to tell the story of Jesus and his glory, to tell the old, old story, of Jesus Christ my Lord."   James
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