Open Poetry #27 |
What Love He Had For Us |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
When Adam and Eve sinned Death was brought upon Every generation Until the end But GOD loved us so much That he didn't want that Type of future for us So he sent his only begotten son In our behalves To atone what Adam and Eve did Jesus suffered for us He was spit on Had to wear a crown of thorns Go in front of people Without his outer garment on He was spoken down to He even had to carry his own stake Jesus had to endure Being nailed Hand and feet to a stake But he did all this for us And for his father GOD Who loved us so much He watched his son suffer for us What love he had for us Cold hands means a warm heart |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very beautiful write,,, QjQ |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Still not as much love as I feel when I think about you Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
thank you for your comment this is a beautifull poem, although i have no religion, but this still was amazing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Yes, God loved us that much, and more. Not only did Jesus die for us, but every day He's leading us home... ~El Campeador “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Your love of God shines through in this piece, Julie. Nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Jesus is the worthiest man to ever have lived. Even greater in heaven is he now. Praise be to him and thanks for the psalms you gave. Jai |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Amen! This is so beautiful, going in the library! Bless that sweet soul of yours. A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like the way you told this...reminded me of the song..."I love to tell the story of Jesus and his glory, to tell the old, old story, of Jesus Christ my Lord." James |
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