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QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-07-09 10:23 PM

only moments together in
time bring together

memory's remembered till

touch my heart ~ leave
memory's

moist my lips ~ with kisses
as you caress

slowly let your eyes reveal
my flesh

surrender your love as
captive of my heart

let our emotions entangle ~

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-07-09 10:32 PM

entangled is a good place indeed

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-07-09 11:15 PM

Tender--and very sensuous.

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-07-10 06:49 AM

this would be a lovely way for us all to live our lives together, open to the acceptance of everyone, who they are, what they believe in, supporting where they are going...we should care about the souls of others as well as our lovers...isn't that true love? Anyway, those were the thoughts your poem evoked? Thanks and have a great day.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2003-07-10 06:59 AM

Most beautifully expressed
Hope

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-07-10 08:55 AM

Q-
This is lovely...very much enjoyed.

Patricia

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-07-10 09:20 AM

Very nicely written..
Much enjoyed the read this morn.
~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-07-10 09:27 AM

QjQ
Hot stuff, enjoyed.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-07-10 09:31 AM

Nice job Q - may this be your reality
xxoo

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

9 posted 2003-07-10 09:34 AM

Hi there Q. Good morning.
Your heart is filled
with sunshine today
to write such loving poetry.
Thanks for sharing
See Ya Bon-Bon

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

10 posted 2003-07-10 09:35 AM

I liked it a lot.
keep on writting.

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

11 posted 2003-07-10 05:42 PM

Delightful, romantic write,
no doubt from a very romantic
heart!
Enjoyed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2003-07-11 12:18 PM

Vibrant write!
Nice presentation, unique and creative.
Enjoyed. TD

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

13 posted 2003-07-11 12:34 PM

Great write QjQ

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

14 posted 2003-07-11 01:07 AM

QjQ...This is a striking poem. I really liked the format of this poem, as well as the the way you phrased this poem of love.

***Ivy Rose

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2003-07-11 02:33 AM

wow! very hot!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

16 posted 2003-07-11 03:09 AM

enjoyed thank you~ARH

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