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Open Poetry #27

Born: into world of hate

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-07-11 05:29 PM

Children
Newly born into this world
Not knowing
The pain and sorrow
Yet to infest there souls

New eyes preying
Into darkness
Searching for answers
To first questions in minds
Waiting for future truths
To unfold

Covered with lies
Blinded by
The happiness
Forced upon there souls

Soon to change
To pain and suffering
After longing for love fades
With every step they take

Alone
They find themselves
Wanting that love back
Once forced
Into there weakened minds
Now knowing
They have to find
There own
Little happiness
So they can keep
There souls

Time travels along
Soon they find the world
To be there own
Little hell
Burning with rage
They destroy themselves
Till souls travel on
And the shells rot
To dust
And the dust becomes
The newly formed hate
Soon to penetrate
Newly born souls

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-13 02:39 PM

Good job

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-07-13 02:46 PM

not all are born into the dust of hate, thank goodness
and those who are need a big broom,
to sweep it away from their heart and soul

Jennis#1
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since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

3 posted 2003-07-13 02:46 PM

Super job on poem.

Jenn

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-07-13 03:10 PM

"They have to find
There own
Little happiness"

Yes, we all, as adults, must find what brings us joy in our lives. But the thoughts of children being without it is just frightening, for their souls are innocent. Oh, and did you not mean for "there" to be their?

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