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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Because because it isn’t about reasons because I don’t have to ask myself the why because I know when I want to say reasons they are there because I discover all of these reasons as I go along already loving you because I love you without reason without need of reason because the reasons come without thought or call because I realize know none are needed because I love you simply love you that is why |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
the ONLY reason...h |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
and I love you and your words, just because i do.  Love the presentation of this Ed. I like this style on you! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like an excellent reason to me!--and I like the way you put your point across!--the page!   EA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed....love just is, because! There is sweetness in this, and although it sounds simple, it isn't. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes sir rey bub...this one I liked a lot...thank you for sharing...for no reason at all? Smiles and hugs...love to you always. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
It is so woven, like your poem, that it feels simple to the touch. Well crafted, sir. s.a.g. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just beautiful. No reason to reason love. Patricia |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely write fellow poet. Why? Just because. Bon-Bon |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed: what a beautiful soul you have to love unconditionally just because *smile* xxoo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one should leave your lady beaming, my friend... for the beautiful words speak a deep and abiding love. *S* I love the way the form reflects the multitude of reasons that don't need to be listed...they're just there... and the one word encompasses them all. *S* Excellent work! *S* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Simply amazing Ed...... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, just beautiful just because.... Hey, I like this style on you too and the words that you wrote into it. "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
It works for me. Thanks for posting it! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Lucky Lady ... to be so loved ... *sigh* Enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Wow! another great poem!  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a very romantic reasonable poem - really great Ed - enjoyed it a lot - Paul |
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