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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2003-07-06 02:59 PM

Soft subtle shades of misty blue
surround my heart with thoughts of you

As azure seas, those are your eyes
all the better to fantasize

Silk touches hiding turqoise steel
incredible the way you feel

My dream lover, the moon is bright
come lie under, with me tonight.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-07-06 03:17 PM

BEAUTIFULLY written!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-07-06 03:29 PM

Damn..and me with brown eyes..grin

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-07-06 03:29 PM

Very nice...James

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-07-06 04:07 PM

very nicely written,,,

i enjoyed the read..

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2003-07-06 05:11 PM

Sandra, it's good to see you posting again and I trust you're feeling better.

This is a lovely poem of romance.

Hugs, Marti

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-07-06 05:17 PM

Sandara, I love this beautiful love poem.

Hugs

Ethel

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2003-07-06 05:21 PM

Nice softness to this Sandra...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

8 posted 2003-07-06 05:23 PM

very nice, enjoyed muchly.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2003-07-06 05:30 PM

People call me 'blue' because my hairl has blue highlights...

absolutely fantatick, I mean it was great. I read it earlier, but couldn't think of anything to say

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2003-07-06 05:35 PM

This is so lovely.
Eric

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-07-06 06:48 PM

Very lovely Sandra.
Hope you are well..and happy.
Good to see your words here again.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

12 posted 2003-07-06 07:19 PM

Like the sound of this one. The shades of blue have the sound of softness and beauty.
A peaceful write.
Bon-Bon

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2003-07-06 08:24 PM

Hmmm, this is my kind of poem!

Thanks Sandra~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

14 posted 2003-07-06 08:44 PM

Just lovely Sandra. hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2003-07-07 02:21 PM

Sandra:

absolute Heaven indeed
beautiful
xxoo

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

16 posted 2003-07-07 04:46 PM

I so have missed your writing!
This was quite intriguing, such a nice rhythm...perfect for couplets, or couples...
TD

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

17 posted 2003-07-07 11:21 PM

Ahhhhh blue eyes ... they do fascinate me so ... *sigh*

lovely read here, dear friend.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

18 posted 2003-07-09 01:28 AM

Such thoughts seep
   from deepest heart

rest to sleep
    a dream apart

                    *S

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2003-07-09 04:29 AM

how romantic!

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

20 posted 2003-07-09 09:33 AM

Very nice write...thank you..

Goldenrose.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

21 posted 2003-07-09 08:28 PM

Veyr nicely written...not one wasted word amoung the bunch

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

22 posted 2003-07-10 06:22 PM

Very romantic...simple but powerful...enjoyed the read

Anwaar

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

23 posted 2003-07-10 07:24 PM

catalinamoon...Vey beautiful and expressive poem. Your images were striking. ***Ivy Rose

Blush
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 56
Ky

24 posted 2003-07-10 10:44 PM

Ummmm
What a dream of a write
Luv it
I just posted my first poem here today
Hope to see you drop by
Susan~

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

25 posted 2003-07-10 10:47 PM

What a Colourful peace! hee hee You have captured blue with your calming poem. Good job!

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

26 posted 2003-07-11 11:23 AM

This is so good - no great - it is just great - I loved it - brought lots of thoughts and feelings - thanks - Paul

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