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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-09 04:34 PM

Ball thoughts into fist
thrash at myself again

I tire

Why do you never?

Fitful sleeper
on fresh page of bed

I never tire

Why wont you calm me?

Black lace wasted lover
on messy dulled bruise

My spine intact

Suprised you're still standing?

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-07-09 04:36 PM

Powerful words...as always.
Eric

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-07-09 04:40 PM

"A fitful sleeper on fresh page of bed."--How do you come up with these creative, inovative, and unique lines?!? You is one talented little missy!

EA

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-07-09 05:33 PM

My little gumdrop stopped in and I missed her. But i found her delicious poem. Shivers gem, shivers

PS, if I'm the peanut, which one are you?

no..i checked login. I know you're there girl.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-09-2003 05:36 PM).]

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-07-09 05:39 PM

I'm gumdrop now? gem drop, gumdrop, i don't mind. i'm here. always here. i like cashew nuts. hey , i just replied to one of yours..spooooky.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-07-09 05:49 PM

spookey? you mean like every other day this happens
potato potato,
tomato tomoto,
Gemjop, gem drop, gumdrop

they look the same

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-07-09 07:11 PM

Wonderful, wonderful! Really loved this one,

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-07-09 07:56 PM

gem:

some days I am surprised I
wake up at all
lol

seriously . . .

spine intact - I have no idea how
xxoo

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

8 posted 2003-07-09 08:05 PM

nice write,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-07-09 09:53 PM

you speak from strength in your words, always

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-07-09 10:05 PM

Bloooooody brilliant

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-07-09 10:19 PM

Hey Gemmagirl

I love this line

Ball thoughts into fist
thrash at myself again

and this.....

Black lace wasted lover
on messy dulled bruise

You really are a talent, little lady.

Hugs to you

Ethel Mae

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

12 posted 2003-07-09 10:25 PM

cheer up gumdrop,
I wrote a little something for you,
just because you're feeling blue.
It's not a shiver, but it'll do

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At sunset I've won or lost.
At sunrise, I'm out again
-Ray Bradbury

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