Open Poetry #27 |
simple celebration |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yea, I am the quickening trembleskinned and suckling I am scratches ye call sin ssssssssssssssssss I shed another skin-- sacred in the violin crying joy to live again-- I shall be the death of me-- but not today-- no not today. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
NO, ye shall fly my butterfly ye shall fly |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I shall be the death of me-- but not today-- no not today." Very nicely done! Thank you for sharing it. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah leave it to H to come up with the perfect reply. Did you read it K? Read it again, and again until you realize what others see that you won't allow yourself to. With that I'll shut up and run away from the impending hypocrite remarks hurled my way..phblllllt! grins |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Helen? and? Ice...you are too warm to suit your name. But it's okay, I had to add a blaze to suit MINE. *smile* Thank YOU. And Raph? "phblllllt!" ???? grin. Gotta a hair stuck on yer tongue? three of my special peops. Gotta love it. Why, you'd think it was my BIRTHDAY or somethin'! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
No.......Not today.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ED? I am SO sorry--oh yeti? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
K - late on this . . . but mannnn - ssssssssssssssssssss awesome write and what a way to bring in your day . . . I heard that skin shedding . . . xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no not today, not today, i even allow myself to actually eat CAKE on my birthday ....... have a happy again |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Did I hear Raph echo something that I have heard before? I think...so....I think...so. Let me put my finger into the wind and see which way it blows...oh yes...it blows.... truth. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
no not today... Wonderful write Ser..hope your birthday was a fantastic one. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
better to go (down) in a blaze of glory eh? I thought I was the one true evil in the universe -- is this competition? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Laughing at Reb--um, I don't think there's any competition-- "I am no one..." watch out for flying peas, baby! and thanks all, my simple celebration ended up in a not so simple hangover... Hugs to all, and stabbing at Reb with my pitchfork... grin |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
you have that gift of molting...and the words continue to shine along with the rejuvenated skin... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
karen, let me write like youuuuuuuu! bloody amazing. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I just wish I could see inside your head for a little while. You are really amazing, Lady....so much stuff going on in there.......and you can tell it all so well. You do fly, girlie.... Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-16-2003 02:06 PM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Nice Write S! I really Enjoyed it a lot ARCTIC WIND |
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