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the nonexistent road
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the nonexistent road |
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Gavin Junior Member
since 2003-06-22
Posts 47 |
staring at the road so close to the ocean and far from the shore i place a humbled step and walked a couple more and i find that i am no more lost than where i was before so i journey along its segways, its twists and its falls a poet looking for inspiration but none of it befalls because this road is just not life, it resembles nothing of the such this road is just a road of nothing more and less than much so wander it i could and find the adventures of fairy tails but as i wander i see no legends no monsters or deadly trails just miles of nothingness empty and never done someone just left me here with a pen and said have some fun but now the road is disappearing there's no where left to travel this pen of mine is useless if there is no more gravel now i guess it is the end so in my final breath i will tell you of all the places i've been......................it's all been emptiness [This message has been edited by Gavin (07-08-2003 08:59 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, I do believe, dear poet, that the "nonexistent road" of "emptiness" has in and of itself, been a great source of inspiration! Great poem! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, that's a very interesting road considering the ending. I enjoyed this write, Gavin. Keep that pen busy. |
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