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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-07-08 10:58 AM

Expressive Eyes

Spring had come truer then before, with clear open endless eyes
Soft moist ocean-like sky, flaming with brilliant undulations of colorful reflecting prism-like lights
Horizon over the sea turning on its side, dancing, leaping, teaming with boats
The wind, silent like a pillow tasteless, enticing warmth...
There was no pace, simply the now, consciously alive,
Contented to flow me with a light pause, windsailing consciousness
Waves, brilliant sparkling diamond like blues, lighted over a panorama of endless hunchbacks
Lulling, spilling over endlessly, with the familiar exotic smell of the sea, and that natural immersed rock, symbolic, enthralling, masterful
Pure fresh cool water, listlessly enveloping the senses to merge with soul
Somehow, this colossal room is filled with a fascinating mystery and a genuine meditation
Powerful giving nature with emblematic imagery, elaborate prose, chance, and responsibility. Journalism created languidly by God, hewn by his own hands.
What force heaped this boiling broach, like a table waiting to be supped?
Predestined filled pockets of melancholy jubilation, cultivating, peaking the senses
Fixed agenda, filtering through white corsets of foam. Morphine sobriety, rotating like the finest of fine brogue Edwardian china.
A voice, which soothingly faintly echoes a course, fills the night above grassy distant shores. Moist, tropical glistening expressive eyes of the deepening, mysterious, ocean.

By Lee J.

© 2003 Lee J. (All rights reserved)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-07-08 11:03 AM

"There was no pace, simply the now, consciously alive,
Contented to flow me with a light pause, windsailing consciousness "

....every time I read you, I am blown away!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-09 08:36 PM

terrific and holds interest,,

i'm surprised it has been overlooked?????

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-07-10 02:19 AM

I love the ocean!
Description is filled
with intrigue!
GREAT write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-07-10 03:00 PM

LeeJ

"Pure fresh cool water, listlessly enveloping the senses to merge with soul
Somehow, this colossal room is filled with a fascinating mystery and a genuine meditation"

This could be said of your poem...it's so filled with beautiful imagery and is spritually uplifting.

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