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Of Eden |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is an air of innocence hanging close to your lips - It has the taste of eden before the fall. You see me...as if I stood in the light of a thousand brilliant moons. This is what it's like to be truly naked. To be seen. I close my eyes...leaning to your lips. And breathe the air of eden. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sigh. When will I ever learn?  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You see me...as if I stood in the light of a thousand brilliant moons. This is what it's like to be truly naked. To be seen. Eric, Yes...to be truly seen and accepted in love. As always, an amazing write. Patricia |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I got goose bumps reading this... and those yummy shivers lol always a wonderful read  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is an air of innocence hanging close to your lips - It has the taste of eden before the fall. You see me...as if I stood in the light of a thousand brilliant moons. This is what it's like to be truly naked. ============================ damn............................. whew ............................ sigh ............................ you take succintity to new heights........ outstanding depth of expression using less as more. very cool ... very well done poet sir. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You see me...as if I stood in the light of a thousand brilliant moons You just have it dont ya eh? how do you do it? I felt this, under my skin. so, its going in my library. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
was so excited, i forgot to add. keep doing this, its becoming a habit. grrrr |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Words that whisper soft as a kiss... Lovely. Sunkissed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice way to put it...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is an air of sweet mystery reaching out from these pages envelopping me in beauty ... Put your hands over my eyes your light shines so bright and makes me blind ... oh, it's too late. A thousand brilliant moons challenge the Sun ... fusion is the solution. Light to light .. At light speed we return to Eden, to innocence ... Dear Eric, your words open the gates to divine realms ... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Oh, lucky you! And a nice write, too. s.a.g. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok...I'm a sucker for a sigh. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You see me...as if I stood in the light of a thousand brilliant moons. This is what it's like to be truly naked. To be seen. And, Eric... what really makes it good is when we are loved no matter what...even after we are seen.  Hugs  Ethel |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A wonderfully romantic poem,Eric.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaaahhh... this is so beautiful, so delicate in love, so strong in passion, so open and honest and True... a letting go of the ego, standing naked and yet fully comfortable in the brilliant Light of Love. Profound in its wisdom, brilliant in its beauty, overflowing with delicious sensuality and love. Thank you, my beloved poet, for sharing... I love you, Moca |
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AnamCara Junior Member
since 2003-06-25
Posts 41Canada |
a thousand shadows cover over you yet I still see you shining as the moon itself. You are not poetry alone this is the surface You are pure love reaching far ...caressing me deep down inside Love, Angela |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Applauding here...wonderful write |
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