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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There was a time when I became the colors of the rising sun playing off the clouds of me refracting me in jubilee... I remember I was young I left the prison of my skin. Bouncing off the ceilings of the prison that I would become. Every now and then I see that part of us that has no end. Bouncing off the walls again-- yearning for eternity breaking through the walls of me as sunlight playing through the clouds on a gathering of rain, and there I am, I am, again. * * * Cause I love you, lady!  |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
this one I like, yep, a good 'un. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a wonderful write for our Sue |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I remember I was young I left the prison of my skin. Bouncing off the ceilings of the prison that I would become. Funny we talked about this once, i felt this exact thing call it heaven, nirvana or the playboy mansion. But that's where life started to hurt, coming back to this and struggling to get back to that feeling, that place like an alarm disrupting a great dream. Hope you do get it back, the both of you. Hugs to two of my favourite ladies |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..I know this place as well.... Very nicely done Ser. A lovely poem by one lovely lady to another. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
she'll love it. I did. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There was a time when I became the colors of the rising sun playing off the clouds of me refracting me in jubilee... ~*~ She's smiling... I know, 'cause I'M smiling! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karen . . . thank you *smiling* that you posted this . . . it is so beautiful and sad in its own write . . . but it did need to breathe and here it is for me You are a beautiful person and I love you I cant see the screen because I am crying Bless your heart, you see inside of my soul down to the depths and manage to grab your hand in , reach down, pull that person out that is hiding in there and bring her close and say: it will be OK Thank you Karen and yes . . . this is for us both indeed and I so needed this today you have no idea . . . well actually you do funny you posted this today . . . a prism indeed . . . Thank you so so much . . . I am smiling . . . promise Thank you everyone for such sweet responses Sue xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-08-2003 01:12 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Everything about this post has touched me sensitivities! Your wonderful poem, your honoring of our littlewing--and her reply! Lovin' hugs and big smiles to you both! Linda |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
see it's people like you that touch my heart and make me cry..Sue is honored along with everyone else to have you in their life oohh mind if I include myself in that everyone else bit lots of these xxxx and some of these oooo Kris If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all for reading me. Sorry if I've been "not here", I'm just not all there, if that makes any sense to you. Geez. And thanks to Sue and ALL of you for being a continued source of inspiration. You are all VERY good to me, and I appreciate it much. Love you all. |
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