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Open Poetry #27

She Came to Me...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-07-07 10:29 PM

It was by happenstance,
Just one of those times,
When she came to me,
Came the maker of rhymes.
She sang of love and heart’s romance,
With pure clear notes of crystal chimes,
A song of all you mean to me,
A simple tune of yet to be
Enwrapped in you eternally,
With rhythms of night’s passion dance
Reminding me my love of thee
Came the maker of rhymes,
Just one of those times,
With just a glance,
Of heart’s disclose,
With just a glance,
Of you, my Rose.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-07-07 10:34 PM

Love is so like that

Interesting presentation and rhyme scheme.
Enjoyed very much. TD

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-07-07 10:53 PM

Nothing finer

than a poet
in love...

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2003-07-08 01:13 AM

beautiful words, beautiful love!

Thanks A Romantic Heart!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-08 05:17 AM

sweet

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2003-07-08 08:43 AM

romantic hearts , sing songs in harmony

Hope

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-07-08 08:54 AM

Very beautifully expressed Tim.
Much enjoyed this lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

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