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Carolina
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

0 posted 2003-07-07 08:48 PM

She knew better
than to dance
with the devil
She felt
his eyes
burning
her skin -
She felt
his fiery
breath
against
her neck
while the sins
that filled her dreams
swelled
in her head
swooning
her desires
to be with him.

His grin
of
lustful tastings
dripped
from his
lips
as he begged
her to join him
on the dance floor
While she wanted to
waltz
he wanted to
tango
The only compromise
was
the
polka.

© Copyright 2003 Lisa - All Rights Reserved

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2003-07-08 12:53 PM

LOL, a good write, I'd have to choose the tango.

ambrish
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since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

2 posted 2003-07-08 04:55 AM

a beautiful poem

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

3 posted 2003-07-08 02:20 PM

but ya see -- what this little number fails to mention is that the little number that wrote this even makes the polka look like the lambada?

LTNS Carolina -- damn it's good to see you back in form!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-07-08 03:38 PM

I'd prefer the waltz as well! --but dancing the polka is better than dancing alone!

Enjoyed!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-07-08 08:09 PM

Carolina - I see many thoughts with your writing. Compromise, seems good, but then...

BC

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

6 posted 2003-07-08 08:11 PM

Thank you, everyone! I've missed being around. It's good to be back again.

LR, I teach private lambada classes as PU!

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