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Chewing on sand
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Chewing on sand |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I bit too long ago and still I chew repeating on me by night, by day knees battered against tide knowing i'm only ankle deep sea weed winds its grip tenfold like layers of sand deep buried i wish were my haunting tides of you. [This message has been edited by gemjop (07-07-2003 12:04 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ouch.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Stunning imagery! I love your poetry. Love, Margherita  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
shivers....still got them I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
like layers of sand deep buried i wish were my haunting tides of you. Gemma, I hope that the one this is intended for is reading every one of these. I hate it so bad that you've been hurt like this.  Heart hugs to you, my friend,  Ethel Mae  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too lady, me too |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem: you reach into my chest and grab my heart everytime and still I chew yes . . . and still xxoo |
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