Open Poetry #27 |
Doctors....Offices |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Doctors do---oc---torsssss doctors offices doctors of----fiii----ces doctors offices The waiting room room waiting rooo---mah wa---itttttt--ing rooo--mah It is a WAIT-ing room What good are appointments when a person is there? Because she goes to the WAIT-ing rooo-mah and waits and waits and WAIIITTTT-SSSSSSS!!!! in the waiting room of the doctor's office Then.... they call her and she goes to the other room examine--ing room the e--xammmm-ining room she goes to the examining room to wait to waaaaa-itttt Then the doctor comes in and says we need to do an x-ray x-ray X-AH-RAY And she thinks waaaaaaiiiiiittttt again wait again wait again and she does!!!! This is what I actually experienced in the doctor's office today. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
I'm sorry for your experience, but you expressed it well here. Maybe the next visit will be better. quatro |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
GG, ya make me laugh! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
this is excellent, and hilarious. you picked the perfect subject to use this style on Ethel Mae, it's really effective. the looooong waiiiiiits. it's just so fitting. you really do make me smile at how you can make everything you do great. This is so going into my library as another reminder of one of the many ways your poetry blooms into so many different styles. proud of ya gal. thanks for making me giggle this morning, oh and sorry that you had to go to the doctors, hope you're ok.i was wondering where you were yesterday, cos you werent around here. mystery solved. Speak to you soon lady, much love, gem xxx |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
youve dipicted this all too well, from one who knows |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... been there, done that one many times too, Ethel. Loved the way you portrayed this. I could picture myself right there waittttting with you! Hope all is well! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I feel your pain. I once had to wait 2HOURS in the "examining room" I was like, can we go home now? I feel better now. Is this the new "Ethel style?" I like it on you, but I might laugh too much. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A delightful presentation of a not so delightful experience! LOL Love & Laughter, Linda P.S. Hope you get a clean bill of health! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
True...I decided nomore doctors...and no more waiting around to find out what they can't do for me...hope the results for you were better hugss M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
hmmm...reminded me of the time I was left waiting for 2 hrs with nothing on but one of those paper robe/sheet thingys. I was freezing!!! I feel you... Susan C. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I'MMMMMM.......S.....TTT....ILL..... WW......A...I...TINGGGGGGGGGG. I.N..... THE.......W......AI...TING.....ROOOOOOOOOMM....AND I'M.CCCCOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLD!!!!!! LOL Bon-Bon |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I stillllllll looooovvvvveeee tthhhhhhiiiissss poooooeeeemmm. I'mmmmmm glaaaaaad ittt'ssssss bbaaaaaccccckkk attttt ttthhhhhheeee toooooop. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can always count on you Ethel for a big smile! Well done! ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
What really bugs me is they demand that you are there 15 minutes before your appointment time. paladin |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Wow !! I hope I never have to wait thaaaaat looooonnnnng.... I could feel your frustration just by reading your poem... Anwaar |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL! This is great, Ethel! I love it. Hugs to you, friend, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
haha YES! I was at the doctor's today and I was getting a bit impatient re-reading the paper over and over again because the doctor was late well least the assistant nurse (was a dude obviously) was hot He coulda had me squeeze his hand 2 check my strength all day Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
hurry up and wait... Darling write here, Lady. Enjoyed |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I sent you such a "touching" email about this wonderful poem and you didn't even respond...Now I'm just crushed and hurt and feeling sorry for myself...that's okay though....My "Toe" will grow another nail......I'll survive....I'll be okay in a month or two |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed this Ethel...staying healthy is one way to avoid the doctor!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) That's the problem with doctors today, they are only going 75% speed when they could be going 100%! (sad sigh) Walter Peyton died because he was signed as someone to get a transplant, but he never got it after waiting over five years! A friend of mine died because the doctor wasn't taking her job seriously and saying "Please wait, we'll hear nback from you shortly!" (wipes tears) You speak of this truth so well, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LOL Ethel - I do know this well seeing as I work at one lmao nice change . . . I am liking this xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey everybody I'm really sorry that I waaaiiiiitttteeeedddd so long to respond to your replies. It looks like ya'll have had the same experiences as I've had. I thank you all for reading and replying to my poem. I really do appreciate it!! "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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