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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Why is it that you cannot see, What it is I dream to be? Perhaps it is you are afraid, That I might breach, might escalade Battlements within my mind Reaching what I seek to find, Finding what is hidden there, Beyond the doubts of pain’s beware. Why do you fear all I have sought? Will all my searching be for naught, In the dreams that I seek out, Dispelling thoughts of mortal doubt, Why do you ask of what I seek, Is it that but you are weak? And so I journey to the night, Searching, seeking, of the light, While all the while I feel your clasp Restraining me as padlocked hasp, Why is it that you cannot free, Me from the night to lightness flee, Why is it that you cannot see, What it is I dream to be? |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
And so I journey to the night, Searching, seeking, of the light, While all the while I feel your clasp Restraining me as padlocked hasp, Why is it that you cannot free, Me from the night to lightness flee, Why is it that you cannot see, What it is I dream to be? Tim: I feel like you know me. This is so WELL expressed.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's frustrating, isn't it? good write |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And so I journey to the night, Searching, seeking, of the light, While all the while I feel your clasp Restraining me as padlocked hasp, Why is it that you cannot free, Me from the night to lightness flee, ~*~ So many thoughts flooded my mind if I thought you were truly asking a question to which there might be an answer... and for every reader... there will be a different answer... Good reading, Tim. Thank you. |
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