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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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camoflaged in poetry an ugly frog almost became my lover [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-01-2003 09:52 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Great write!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow, good one, and very true. So many romances have begun from poetry, blossoming over the wires of the internet and falling prey to reality and life once they meet. Happens every day.... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
gee when i got kissed i became a prince,,  A voice of honesty |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love these short and not-so-sweets. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Grand Slam...love it! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oh I likes this |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If this wasn't so sad, it would be hysterically funny! Keep your radar up!  EA |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Ummm, been there had that done! Great write Goddess! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lol |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good thing you wrote "almost" *smiling* because I love this xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
They can slip right in on you...or is it hop? Almost had that happen myself... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kauro....thanks for stopping by yes, magnus.....happens too often, easy to be prey out here at times q.....yes, you are a prince to yours i am sure..but keep it that way , okay? thanks pil....... dixie, glad you had a chuckle sue...almost, yes, almost, but not quite.... smack of reality,thankfully rat... raf.....glad you liked tim......guess its commonplace, isn't it? e.a...I am trying real hard bboy......slam ? you think so? i hope so? rat...yes, slip, hop, all the same....stopped in time this time |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kauro....thanks for stopping by yes, magnus.....happens too often, easy to be prey out here at times q.....yes, you are a prince to yours i am sure..but keep it that way , okay? thanks pil....... dixie, glad you had a chuckle sue...almost, yes, almost, but not quite.... smack of reality,thankfully rat... raf.....glad you liked tim......guess its commonplace, isn't it? e.a...I am trying real hard bboy......slam ? you think so? i hope so? rat...yes, slip, hop, all the same....stopped in time this time |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Read it again but it really got my attention. Its funnier the more you read it. Just hope I dont croak...... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no frogs in brooklyn just golden knights |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
sounds more like a snake..! interesting concept goddess |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-05-2003 04:53 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - ok, ok, so you didn't kiss me yet... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
gave me a smile...only because...I know M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks vandana for stopping in..... bill......yes key words, not yetmaureen.......lol, wonder if your ugly frog was mine too...... |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Well said, very amusing. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
and you can do much better Good job HoneyI said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is awesome . . . I cant stop smiling . . . sorry |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
glad u could relate kids sue, smile away................. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
My Dear... Did you ever notice??? those frogs start out as polliwogs, and they can't seem to sometimes tell the head from the tail... And then...they grow up...yeah right. Smilin...good bit of hopping on your part! TD |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
May not be frogs in brooklyn but there are seahorses in queens! |
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