Open Poetry #27 |
Funeral |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A poem I've been working on for a while now....this arose from a discussion I had with a fellow poet a while back. FuNeRaL Do not offer me words of encouragement, wishes of best to my words of pain, this life of less. I am pathetically pathetic, yes, but, clever am I to your false attempts. Do not throw your benevolence against skin walls hoping it will stick. Temporary strong arms cannot save me in my fling of self on the mercy of pen. And, I’m numb of trying to make you believe that my pour isn’t just a hobby, it’s exemplary. So forgive me if this isn't the sweetness you've known or if this drama isn't one of my masterpieces. I ask not for a shoulder to cry on or smooth sheets to rest my bones, I am beyond repair and seek not your safety for this selfish endeavor. I ask not for pity or wisdom inked, just eyes of mute replies; For, I’ve never been miss popularity and need only more attendants for my funeral. By Melissa Long-Monette |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Melissa: this is the best line I have read in awhile . . . in my fling of self on the mercy of pen xxoo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
As always, I am in awe of your writing. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Serenity tiptoes in quietly and places a single rose on the coffin, says a silent prayer and exits. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hey Melissa, damn..see you inspire them too..damn grins |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Excellent write Melissa! A keeper for sure and this has to be you at your BEST!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
mourning soft thoughts reading, in silence |
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