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Cytten
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 16
Canada

0 posted 2003-06-13 04:39 PM



Should I show him what I feal
should O let him see
my hurt, pain and suffering
lt him into my learning heart

Love from a stolen heart
guilt building up inside of me
why...why...why

Stealing is wrong
I am Bad..
stealing a heart from some one I love
stealing is bad
why...why...why...why

He is mine and I am his
she is alone...crying over him
hating me....killing my memory in her heart
wanting me but not suffering

Now she tells me to go
piss off and leave her alone
missing me like no other
loving the one she hates

© Copyright 2003 Cynthia - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
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Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-13 05:19 PM


welcome to PIP...
a sad post... for the first. Hope to see more.


the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-06-13 05:38 PM


Welcome to passions!!!!!
A little sad for the first post but beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-06-13 07:21 PM



Welcome to PiP...yes, a sad post, but you've written it down, and we never know what tomorrow will bring, perhaps a new chapter.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-13 08:34 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Cytten, this is such a heartaching debut, dearest friend, I hope all is alright, for I believe stealing is wrong too and the best way to be is unselfish but at the same time I understand the frustration and truly believe in the days ahead you and her will both find what is right! Welcome to Passions, sweet Cytten, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cytten, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-06-14 05:20 AM


sad
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-06-14 12:26 PM


C:

Welcome to PIP!

Powerful entrance
Oh mann it is always the ones we love the most we are mean to . . .
Why?  eternal questions . . .

nice write sad but nice
xxoo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-02-01 10:07 PM


Welcome to pip!

ARCTIC WIND

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