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As Always
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As Always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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As Always Sometimes the words don't come at all and the dreams I once had seem to stall preventing me from tomorrow's touch. Sometimes your teachings scare me leaving me wondering how everything so natural with you comes so hard to me. I feel opportunity slipping away when sensitivity takes hold and leaves me fragile in your wake. So I go it alone, changed by you but remaining the same as you left me... As Always M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-06-2003 12:38 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
somehow, even when you are hurting, your words are gentle and comforting to the reader |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
"So I go it alone, changed by you but remaining the same as you left me..." You speak these feelings so well, something like Midnitesun said above.. you convey pain so gently, it doesn't seem to hurt quite so much as it did before I read this. Pepper |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - but your dreams are there, and they will happen... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen: So I go it alone, changed by you but remaining the same as you left me... God Maureen EXACTLY . . . kind of in a pile heap? Much love to you xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A sweet flow...James |
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