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Three A.M. Logic
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Three A.M. Logic |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Three A.M. Logic Discussion of soul to mind whispered before dawn beckons syllogisms. Concepts intimated, integrated in dark of when one idea begins and another ends Discoveries molded of thoughts channeling free without structured design. Poet then finds voice in free verse of thoughts Let my soul speak and pen glide free in the hour of three. Flow now scattered thoughts of broken English For is it of function or form... Process or bottom line that is poetry’s realization, revelation? And does it matter if not captured in moment’s ink? For when rest befall this weary mind, no recollection of 3 a.m. logic. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia Enjoyed, get some of my best thoughts around 3am but unless I write them down I forget them. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The clipped format of this is like a lost thought in the shadow...you know it's there, did you speak it, or just dream it... This is very much an excellent 3:00 a.m. poem....something that I truly believe we have all experienced at one time or another.... Very good, Patricia! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was refreshing and new... very much enjoyed. TD |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Been there, done that. Enjoyed the write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Patricia, I have poetic thoughts at 3am, but just about then, I'm ready for bed. You captured the feeling and logic well |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Let my soul speak and pen glide free in the hour of three. Yes...Patricia...a worthy poem of a poet's mist...between the dark, and dawn.... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
gotta write it down right away or its never the same |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - many nights I've know this 3 a.m. logic. But I've written then so as not to forget words of thoughts... BC |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Exactly!!! Sometimes words fail me; but they didn't fail you. Thanks for sharing. Pepper |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Patricia - yes yes exactly . . . always write it down . . . You may actually come back to it and feel empowered by those 3am musings Loved this query indeed xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 brilliant!the format supports the early AM thought process |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We each receive a wake up call from God between the hours of 3 and 6 AM. Most of the time...we hit the God snooze alarm with a proise to get back to Him (or Her)later. As Rumi said - "The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you. Don't go back to sleep. You must ask for what you really want. Don't go back to sleep." I am glad you listened. I would have missed your beautiful words. Eric |
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