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Open Poetry #27

Plum Petals Falling

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-07-06 08:38 AM

Blossoms falling:
Shook by wind
They salt
The spring air rose.
Almost white,
Confetti thrown,
Dropping from tree top height.
*
Drifting, blowing
Warm air lifting;
Soft as late snowflakes
They pass
Before my eyes
To nestle,
Melting, swiftly
Hiding in the grass.
*
A Bunting lights the highest branch,
Petal showers fall below.
A tuft of down escapes its breast,
(Aloft in breeze, it joins the flakes)
Blends rose and white, with indigo.
*
end

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-07-06 08:42 AM

An enchanting visage for sure...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-07-06 08:55 AM

ice
A teaspoon of honey.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-07-06 09:24 AM

Your use of imagery is beyond compare..
Much enjoyed the read this ayem.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

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