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Zen Walk (another very old one -- my personal favorite but edited for open) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Walk into Zen The Cloud of Karma Descending haze The trip to Mecca Ended Lexissa's final syllables Dripping from crimson Into a pool I thought An Oasis Blades roll off Stained The slice tango stultified In cemented phrases Lexis lectrons pouring from Twin Strands of copper Daggared ice She used to leak Zen In rivers -- the Zen Queen But Flowers spilled out of Her pearls And withered She wrapped me Her voice around me In neo classic booths As I tripped while mummified Aztecs dined on my mind Sacrificed to Ennui Again Four Cigars into Tuesday My Zen Burned Maduro Cannibals on flesh Couldn't draw blood Like she drew me Into the universe Empty bar stools Hurt more than barbed wire And broken glass I finally shut-up Tuesday too thousand More years my lord February's gloom Is brighter than smoke signals Tapped on keys Remorse code Sans X Oh-2 Disconnected from the universe Whata twisted pair Could do for me now Lexissa I am the evil she spoke of Encrypted in remorse code Don't touch me Don't freaking touch me This is not A secure connection Golden Silence Rattles Thursday In sonic boomed windows NT It's cold in cyberspace Like empty bars Full of fans What she tried to tell I couldn't hear Until silence Boomed Prime Zen Rare Devoured in waiting Lips She leeched into Embryonic children On snow daze All in all Not a bad walk Mecca rocked [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (07-05-2003 04:45 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yea, whatever gets u thru the night, its allright, allright, whats the difference between zen and tao? |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
that was Zen and this is Tao! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that was Zen and this is Tao! yes, perfect response! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, then...if this is Tao, that must have been Zen! [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-05-2003 10:55 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very clever tweaking here... Painful at points, but, I still found myself grinning in recognition at the pure wit behind the pain. Yer somethin' Reb!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I am the evil she spoke of Encrypted in remorse code Don't touch me Don't freaking touch me This is not A secure connection Golden Silence Rattles Yanno... I think if I came upon these words anywhere... I'd look for feathers. *S* I don't blame you for favoring this one... it's excellent. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a favorite of mine too...of course, all of yours are |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
ah dixie -- your adulation is always gladly received with gratitude! *bow* auntie -- if not good I am always distinct -- and in your kind debt *bows again* blazey -- it's nice to know that someone gets it  -- yep -- I'm somethin -- but it may not be somethin good...  ethel -- well that would seem logical  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: LOL. Methinks 'twas more than boredom that made them dine on such thoughts. More like hunger, for a taste of your unique humanity. |
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