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Intentional Deception........... Or Honesty............
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Intentional Deception........... Or Honesty............ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Some can deceive with words some deceive with words intentionally Some can hurt with deception deception hurts some words hurt Deception is a fault fault of deception if intentional ******<>****** Some are honest truth lives honest with truth Honesty is good goodness is truth and honesty Honesty is a virtue viture honesty The eyes can tell difference difference is in the eyes The eyes tell difference between intentional deception and honesty This comes from me just trying to write a different style of poetry....nothing else.  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-05-2003 10:54 AM).] |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
nothing wrong with a little experimentation. fine effort. |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
You definately suceeded! I think you should experiment more often. Great job! ~*Summer*~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ethel.......good for you, to break out... continue to grow, i liked this different shade of ethel [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-05-2003 11:49 AM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel--I enjoyed this style...and the thought that went into it. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice style, and thoughts |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I think I may have seen this style before somewhere  come on in -- the water's fine |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tim, thanks . Into The Flame, thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. . Michele, thank you! I appreciate that. . Martie, thank you. I'm glad that you liked it. . Dixie, thanks . Local Reb, LOL I couldn't get that style you write out of my mind. This is my first feeble attempt at writing in this exact way. It was a lot of fun, so I will try more. . . Hugs to you all  Ethel |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Lies do nothing but hurt and destroy in the end. Good thoughts here, Lady. Oh, and your new styling is very nice. Enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, I hate lies more than anything, and my heart cries out when I see someone hurt by a lie! (sad sigh) I want to do nothing but tel the truth to my loved ones, for even if I hesitate having to, I get it all off my chest and I am willing to pay the price for being true to myself! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Ethel... Love this style..love anything different!  Maybe cause I am? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Apparently, familiarity DOES NOT breed contempt.  I'm enjoying this new look on you. Perhaps, it will become fashionable soon? [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-08-2003 05:04 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love how you stretch those poetic wings of yours! Linda |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Yes, I thought I reconized the style It fits you wellI said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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